Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three: 1. All costs are paid by government. 2. All costs are paid by the student. 3. All costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that must be replaid after graduation. Discuss the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?
Many
country
provides several methods to Change to a plural noun
countries
students
to cover there
higher Correct your spelling
their
education
costs
. One method is to offer student
their fees on behalf of bureaucracy; Fix the agreement mistake
students
conversely
, another process is students
should bear Change preposition
for students
his educations expense
. Change to a genitive case
the expense of his education
Third
option is Change the article
The third
students
Change preposition
for students
provide
Fix the infinitive
to provide
his
Correct pronoun usage
their
costs
using loan
from Add an article
a loan
ministry
which have to return Add an article
the ministry
students
during their work period. I shall discuss the necessity of every process. I think that among them, third
option is best for Add an article
the third
a third
students
and nations
.
To begin
with, those governments whome
provide Correct your spelling
who
whom
third level
Add a hyphen
third-level
education
costs
of
their Change preposition
for
students
is
beneficial for each individual Correct subject-verb agreement
are
students
and Fix the agreement mistake
student
also
for society. Education
is become
Change to the active voice
becomes
has become
more easy
Replace the words
easier
to
Change preposition
for
the
Change to a genitive case
the people of the nation
the nation's people
nations
people,
when their governments give their tertiary educations fees Remove the comma
apply
as a result
students
can not find any tenacious conditions related to money
during their study
period which help
them to concentrate more on Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
study
. Add an article
the study
This
has lead
to prosper their personal life. Wrong verb form
led
Moreover
, when more people are become
educative in a community, Change to the active voice
become
have become
this
enrich
the lifestyle of society and makes a nation Change the verb form
enriches
developed
. Wrong verb form
develop
For example
, if administrators take the responsibilities of education
systems that means the group of indigent people can also
get the opportunity of education
resulting in they can improve their personal and community conditions. Therefore
, the more easy education
system a Correct article usage
the education
country
have
, the higher their people’s personal and social life will be.
Change the verb form
has
On the other hand
, those
Change the determiner
that country
those countries
country
where Correct your spelling
students
studnets
bear Correct your spelling
students
their
expense of university studying is beneficial for the Change the word
the
nations
. Students
are taking their
action of their tertiary Change the pronoun
the
study
that
means governments can save a huge amount of Correct pronoun usage
apply
money
from their annual budget by which they can improve a countries
other infrastructure and use Correct the article-noun agreement
countries
a country
this
money
in other sectors such
as agriculture field, Export and Import business, Nuclear field, Reserch
division and so on resulting in the Correct your spelling
Research
nations
can rise their value towards the world which makes a country
more prosperous. For instance
, some countries are developing continuously and many Correct your spelling
people
peope
say that the main reason behind their prosperity is Correct your spelling
people
to
that their Change preposition
apply
students
take their education
liabilities. Hence
, it will more
useful to a Add a missing verb
be more
country
, if their students
paid their third level
Add a hyphen
third-level
study
costs
.
Furthermore
, there other
methods which I think Add a missing verb
are other
more
beneficial is when administrations offer Add a missing verb
are more
loan
to their Fix the agreement mistake
loans
students
to bear their third level
Add a hyphen
third-level
education
expenditures and after completing their graduation, they back it to their authority because this
method can not create any burden on students
, their family and bureaucracy as well. Students
and their families have
not to Add a missing verb
do have
di
any pressure about Correct your spelling
do
university’s
Change noun form
university
education
costs
. They can easily continue their study
and after completing their graduation when they are doing jod
, Correct your spelling
good
this
time they return the money
to the authorities and authority can use it on their other needs which has make
every journey Change the verb form
made
easir
. To illustrate, industrialised countries like Correct your spelling
easier
USA
, UK, Correct article usage
the USA
Australia
Correct word choice
and Australia
us
Correct your spelling
use
this
process on
their Change preposition
in
education
field which make them the highest educative country
. For this
reason, I think that it will be beneficial for every sites
.
In conclusion, Change to a singular noun
site
education
costs
of tertiary can be funded in many ways. Each nations
have Change to a singular noun
nation
their
personal procedure to complete it. There are three methods among them I think Correct pronoun usage
its
third
one is better.Change the article
the third
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