Some
argue that the most significant of being wealthy is the opportunity that it provides to lend a hand and help the needy.
, I disagree with the statement because not only the rich can help
but
every
can reach out and support different
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, being rich
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is not fully fulfilling to
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the service to contribute the poor
as medical care “
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donate’. The benefits of donating
include helping
injured in accidents, undergoing cancer treatment, and battling
diseases, among other reasons.
, financial
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may not fully satisfy their needs, some poor
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eager
to save their life. Many wealthy individuals do not take the effort to learn what impoverished
want. They may not need money even only one piece of
. To sum up, leading
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donateReplace the word
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can
sharingReplace the word
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and
savingWrong verb form
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a life overweigh worthy to donate money.
, not only the rich can help other
but
those from middle-to-income classes can
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, Mother Teresa, who was fully supportive of poor
in the world,
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helping them not in terms of financial
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, but in terms of love.
,
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poor
need medical care badly in case of
any Correct quantifier usage
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earthquakes.
deliverWrong verb form
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food after the war place is equally claimed overweigh to the rich.
,
giveWrong verb form
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more love for a hug and
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time to be with them is
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significant part of
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helping poor
.
In conclusion, there is no relative between a person’s financial situation and
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not
understandWrong verb form
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to help others.
, love and accompany can give
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, I opined believe being rich is not the ability to help others.