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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

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It is concluded that many human beings have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet which I found to be true as there are events that surround negligence of eating well. which I
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 be emphasizing in my paragraph below. Many people find it hard to stick to a balanced diet because the majority of
the
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society is struggling to meet their daily needs which are very difficult to come by
due to
 the economic
condition
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 we are faced with.
For instance
, Inflation in food prices, scarcity, poverty, poor farming et cetera.
Due to
 the increase in the market value of some of the groceries, it has become extremely tedious for most people to get their three square means let alone keep to a healthy diet.
Also
, looking at the rate at which poverty has taken over the entire environment
also
 made it
unable
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 for the city to observe good feeding habits. There is a
numerous
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 number of unemployments men and women in the country which is
also
 one of the main causes of poor ingestion and so on. After all
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 said, there are ways in which the stated problems could be resolved.
And these
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 include getting financial support from the
authority
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 by distributing some funds to the less privileged and helping them secure some minac jobs that would at least give them a daily meal, Introducing Agricultural programmes to enhance good harvest and reviewing the overstated cost of items that would go a long way. In conclusion, a lot of areas finding it hard
with
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 absorption can be resolved with the help of the laws
as well as
 the unity of the community.
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