What are the possible advantages and disadvateges of being a professional athlete?

Sport promotes mental and physical health. Everybody needs to exercise for keeping

health

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professional

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athlete

is so hard and

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lots

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exercises

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benefits

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and drawbacks of

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a professional

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athlete

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. There are

lots

of advantages of exercising professional. The

first

advantage is

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being famous. When an

athlete

plays professionally and becomes a professional

athlete

, he or she will start to play in national champions. She or he will start to play in national champions.

thus

, she will be shown on tv.

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, he or she was seen by people and everybody will know him. The

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advantage is

that

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earning more money. as we know

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when someone

be

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famous,

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the country

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press will invite

he

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or

she

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for their advertising. So, he or she can earn money

from

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different ways.

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being a professional

athlete

have

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lots

of benefits, it has some disadvantages too. The

first

one is that

athlete

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athletes

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have to hard practice every day for many years.

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, professional football players have to spend 5 hours a day

for

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running and 2 hours

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bodybuilding and they have to play football when they are 16 years old. The

second

disadvantages are hard

diet

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. Professional athletes have to eat special food because hard practices need food with

lots

of

calorie

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calories

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and protein.

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, professional football players have to eat 2 potatoes with 5 eggs every day. So, they cannot eat every food. In summary, being famous and earning more money are two benefits of

professional

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athlete

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athletes

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However

, it has some disadvantages too. The

first

is that

athlete

need

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to hard practice for many years and

second

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is that he or she has to get

hard

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diet.