What are the possible advantages and disadvateges of being a professional athlete?

Sport promotes mental and physical health. Everybody needs to exercise for keeping
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professional
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a professional

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athlete
is so hard and
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lots
of
exercises
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benefits
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the benefits

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and drawbacks of
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a professional
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athlete
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athletes

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. There are
lots
of advantages of exercising professional. The
first
advantage is
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being famous. When an
athlete
plays professionally and becomes a professional
athlete
, he or she will start to play in national champions. She or he will start to play in national champions.
thus
, she will be shown on tv.
As a result
, he or she was seen by people and everybody will know him. The
second
advantage is
that
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earning more money. as we know
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when someone
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famous,
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press will invite
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or
she
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for their advertising. So, he or she can earn money
from
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in

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different ways.
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being a professional
athlete
have
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lots
of benefits, it has some disadvantages too. The
first
one is that
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athletes

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have to hard practice every day for many years.
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for
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running and 2 hours
for
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on

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bodybuilding and they have to play football when they are 16 years old. The
second
disadvantages are hard
diet
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to diet

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. Professional athletes have to eat special food because hard practices need food with
lots
of
calorie
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calories

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and protein.
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, professional football players have to eat 2 potatoes with 5 eggs every day. So, they cannot eat every food. In summary, being famous and earning more money are two benefits of
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a professional

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athlete
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athletes

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However
, it has some disadvantages too. The
first
is that
athlete
need
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needs

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to hard practice for many years and
second
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is that he or she has to get
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diet.
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