Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What kind of consequences could this style of parenting have on children as they get older?
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase freedom seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The plural verb want does not appear to agree with the singular subject Every parent. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It appears that well behaved is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that name may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that reputation may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase For instance. Consider adding a comma.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The spelling of behavior is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
The noun phrase young age seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.
The word Further more seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The word Further more seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun silver in your sentence. Consider removing it.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that the form of the verb use does not work with are in this sentence.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example