You are in a hospital with a broken leg.Your colleagues have sent you get well soon greeting cards and gifts.Write a letter to them and include : Thank them for everything Explain how you spend time in the hospital Inform them about your recovery process

Dear All, Hope all of you are in good spirits! I received your letter yesterday and I am still delighted to
day at the get-well-soon card sent by you along with the beautiful lilies and chocolates. For starters, I am recovering quite well and my doctor, Mr Joe suggested that I will be relieved in a few days as my reports came out to be normal. Speaking of which, I spent most of the time in the ward assigned to me. Since it's a sharing ward, there is another patient
to me. He has a five-year-old daughter, Emma, who has started calling me aunty and often comes and plays with me. My family have
become very fond of her, and we have already invited them for dinner at our home once her father and me, both recovers. As mentioned above, I will be discharged
week, mostly on Wednesday. Dr Joe has recommended taking rest for one week and carrying out some physiotherapy exercises which will help me to recover quickly. I will be joining the office as soon as I complete my final checkup post that week. Thank you again for the warm gestures. Yours sincerely, Rajesh Kuttrapalli
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