You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a resident of Amritsar, Punjab. In a recent issue of your magazine, some misinformation was printed.
In the magazine, the article states that Amritsar has little to no public transportation services.
This
is completely incorrect. My city has 24/7 public bus services, as well as a well, developed local train network.
Amritsar is a tourist and there are many people like me who make their living because of tourism. As such
, the incorrect details in an international travel journal can easily hurt the local economy.
Therefore
, I am including a detailed time schedule for public transportation as well as their website portal. I hope that your company can verify the details and print a correction along with correcting information on your website.
Awaiting a quick response.Submitted by 063pinderkaursandhu1997 on
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,