Parents are the best teachers.Do you agree or disagree?

A good
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Good

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parenting is a primary
quideline
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guideline
guidelines

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to support all developmental aspects of a child .Some people hold the opinion that parents perform better as a teacher in each and every child's life.As far as I am concerned, I agree that adequate upbringing of
children
has an influence on moulding their personality development.
First
of all, self-discipline is a key indicator that represents a person's behavioural qualities.
This
includes factors
such
as compassion, patience, self-reliance and many more.Here,
children
could acquire most of
this
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these

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qualities by observing their father and mother. By doing so,they will become a promising generation for the country when they grow up.To illustrate, In Japan
Children
are being programmed to develop
self control
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self-control

It appears that self control is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).

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skills from 1 year of age itself.For
this
reason ,
this
country is more popular for the methods they used for proper child development.
Secondly
,
eventhough
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even though

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studenrs
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students

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spend 90
percentage
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per cent

The word percentage doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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if
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of

The word if doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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a day at school, there are some limitations that make students
to
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apply

It appears that the verb to be should be in the bare infinitive form. Consider removing to from in front of this verb.

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be
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hesitant

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hesistant
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hesitant

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to open up in front of a teacher.Some schools might be focusing only on finishing up the textbook activities and
prepare
Wrong verb form
preparing

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb prepare. Consider changing it.

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pupils for the exam.In
this
case,pupils could seek
parent's
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parents'

It seems that parent's may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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help in order to share
the
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their

The word the may be incorrect in this context. Consider changing it.

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struggles on particular topics as well as stress factors
that
is
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are

The verb is does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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contributed by overtime practices. To illustrate, an average student can be helped by his mother or father to learn more on a subject
instead
of relying on a teacher. To conclude, I can plausibly
agree
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onagree
toagree
withagree

The phrase following the intransitive verb agree seems to be missing a preposition. Consider adding one.

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the argument since every
parents
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parent

The singular quantifier every is followed by the plural noun parents. Consider changing the noun to the singular or using a different quantifier.

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try
the
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apply

It is unlikely that your sentence needs the article the before their. Consider deleting the article.

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their maximum to
built
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build

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a better future for their
children
. I believe that
,
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apply

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parents
cab
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can

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do any role better than anyone for the
well being
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well-being

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of their
children
.
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