The use of mobile phones should be banned in public spaces as libraries, transportations and shpos. To what extant do agree or disagree?

In

this

modern era, the mobile phone is a basic necessity for every individual. But some masses say that

telephone

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telephones

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are prohibited in public spots. Here I am agreed with

this

situation my statement and my arguments will be briefly described in an upcoming paragraph with a crystal clear conclusion. To commence with, a large no of the community says that mobile devices should ban in public

places

like libraries, shops and transportation. To elaborate, many

folk

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folks

The singular countable noun folk follows the quantifier many, which requires a plural noun. Consider using a plural noun or a different quantifier.

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go to libraries for a peaceful environment because they can study properly there without any distractions libraries alwmaintainning silence but sometimes a few irresponsible persons are using mob in that place which disturbed others.

For instance

, I remember

last

month I visited the library there one person is getting phone calls continuously he was attending all call public listening to him and feel

te

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the

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disturbance.

Moreover

, in public transport majority of

population

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the population

The noun phrase population seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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use a smartphone while travelling to their destination for work in that by tym, some society

click

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clicks

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a photo or record videos and Spoiled their peace of mind.

Thus

the phones should restrict in public spots.

Furthermore

, another big proportion against

this

statement that an applying a ban on cell phones in social

places

. In the other words, phones are most important for everyone because 80% of all nation business by their smartphone in some

places

public

telephone

booths are available but in few

places

,

telephone

both there are no

telephone

both nearby in

this

situation faces a lot of difficulties To sum up, folks should aware to know where to use dial and where not yet, they do not try to disturb others and their attention.