demand for food is increasing worldwide. whats the cause of this? what measures can the international community take to meet these demands?
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issue
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we could address it fully.
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steps
this
problem is overpopulation . In fact
the rate of Add a comma
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individuals
birth each day is more than those who die . Change noun form
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reasons
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agricultural produce. Unfortunately , formers Correct article usage
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their harvest , because of the water shortage.
However
, this
issue can be improved by government
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the government
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who
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which
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, they would be encourage
parents by giving them a prize to Change the verb form
encourage
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a born
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child to reduce the population Correct article usage
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volume of traffic . Correct article usage
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of measures.
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although
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the population
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climatic changes have damaged the current supply of food and cuisines , international
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