demand for food is increasing worldwide. whats the cause of this? what measures can the international community take to meet these demands?

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increasing , but it had been considered the most
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. In my opinion, there seems to be two main problems stemming from
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we could address it fully. It is widely known that the main cause of
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the rate of
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birth each day is more than those who die .
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crowded cities
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due to the fact that there are many large families.
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, climatic changes can be affected by population growth. Actually ,climatic changes happening due to various
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like acid rains , global warming and so on , that occur lack of
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agricultural produce. Unfortunately , formers
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who
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should control the societies.
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parents by giving them a prize to
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child to reduce the population
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should use high-technology and genius scientists to
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a way to increase
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of formers .In
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volume of traffic .
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these kind
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of measures. To conclude,
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population
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is increasing and
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climatic changes have damaged the current supply of food and cuisines ,
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community can partly solve
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mentioned.
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