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A lot of students find it difficult to write good essays. There is little that you can do to make your essays better or to make the job easier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Most of the
students
 struggle with writing essays due to the fact that they need to know how to develop different paragraphs and how to structure them.
Although
this
 task might seem challenging, I believe there are enough
sources
 available for them to utilize and improve their writing skills.
Books
 and guidelines which are available in all libraries and bookstores are one of the
sources
 that can assist learners to improve their vocabulary and grammar. If
students
 are equipped with vas vocabulary knowledge and how the grammar works, they surely can rephrase their idea in a number of lines.
However
, they still have to acquire some guidelines on how to form paragraphs. Apart from the
books
 mentioned above, there are other
books
 where
students
 can find guidelines on how to divide their findings into different paragraphs and introduce a thesis statement.
For instance
, they can learn that each essay must have an introduction paragraph, main body, and concluding paragraph.
Moreover
, reading
books
 can be a great help in accumulating a great vocabulary and a notion of how to put sentences together in a professional way.
Thus
, it is advisable that
students
 increase the number of
books
 they read on daily bases.
In addition
, there are other
sources
such
 as television programs, radios, news, etc. which affects proficiency unconsciously.
Finally
, I believe if all the above-mentioned tricks are
practiced
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 on a daily basis, success in writing great essays is inevitable.
Therefore
, I disagree with the statement that mentions there is not much to do to improve essay writing skills.
On the contrary
, as stated before, if all the introduced
sources
 are used wisely, there is little to worry about
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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