Many people in cities today live in high-rise apartment blocks. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of living? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

In

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contemporary epoch, whilst opponents hold the belief that high-level accommodations have a plethora of advantages, proponents have a diverse perspective

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because that might compulsively affect many citizens who raise children . My contention will be

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explained. On the one hand, some advocates are convinced that living in multi-storey buildings is a part of

this

modernized world.

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, that might be more affordable than separated houses, and that will give them the opportunity to ameliorate their future as well as

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their money in doing other beneficial activities.

For instance

, many citizens in South Africa prefer to take

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launches

from banks to reside in these areas rather than other accommodations.

Thus

, what can be said is that these flats are good value for money

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because they are relatively not expensive.

On the other hand

, one might discern that living in

such

high buildings might be dangerous

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for those who are worried about their offspring.

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, many juniors like to explore the environment around them .

As a result

, they might get fallen from any

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verandas

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if anyone thinks about suicide he will instantly jump to harm or kill himself.

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some teenagers in Egypt were dead because of

such

incidents.

Hence

, what can be said is that living in separated residences has many

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demerits

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because they might be safer

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some residents have been struggling

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their rent monthly. In conclusion, After

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essay has manifested the points mentioned above , it can be reiterated that

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residing

in skyscrapers has a plethora of advantages ,because that will not affect our income compulsively ,and authorities ought to provide more buildings for youths in order to be able to find their

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livelihood

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