Many people in cities today live in high-rise apartment blocks. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of living? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience
In
this
contemporary epoch, whilst opponents hold the belief that high-level accommodations have a plethora of advantages, proponents have a diverse perspective,
because that might compulsively affect many citizens who raise children . My contention will be Remove the comma
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further
explained.
On the one hand, some advocates are convinced that living in multi-storey buildings is a part of this
modernized world. In other words
, that might be more affordable than separated houses, and that will give them the opportunity to ameliorate their future as well as exploiting
their money in doing other beneficial activities. Wrong verb form
exploit
For instance
, many citizens in South Africa prefer to take launes
from banks to reside in these areas rather than other accommodations. Correct your spelling
lines
lanes
launches
Thus
, what can be said is that these flats are good value for money ,
because they are relatively not expensive.
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On the other hand
, one might discern that living in such
high buildings might be dangerous especially
for those who are worried about their offspring. Add the comma(s)
,especially
In other words
, many juniors like to explore the environment around them . As a result
, they might get fallen from any varandas
. Correct your spelling
verandas
Additionally
if anyone thinks about suicide he will instantly jump to harm or kill himself. Add a comma
,Additionally
For
instance
some teenagers in Egypt were dead because of Add a comma
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such
incidents. Hence
, what can be said is that living in separated residences has many demirts
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demerits
,
because they might be safer Remove the comma
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although
some residents have been struggling paying
their rent monthly.
In conclusion, After Change the verb form
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this
essay has manifested the points mentioned above , it can be reiterated that residning
in skyscrapers has a plethora of advantages ,because that will not affect our income compulsively ,and authorities ought to provide more buildings for youths in order to be able to find their Correct your spelling
residing
livlihood
.Correct your spelling
livelihood
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