Some people think that Government should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The role of medical care has become a major discussion in today's world as people's life has increased.

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some think that it is the

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of the government to improve the

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of its citizens,others think that

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individuals should take control of their physical conditions.

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two sides and explain why I think it should be the individual liability to maintain one's

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. The

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should display himself/herself actively the knowledge of

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and how to take good care of healthiness throughout the remote areas where there is no

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.

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, special tax incentives could be provided for people who meet the development goal set

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them.

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, the resource needed to implement its policy is already available to them. Another reason is that the heads of state should establish accurate rules and regulations about the improvement of good

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through internet

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like various websites.

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,there are not many patients anymore because of the

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information posts that appear online.And

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country

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can convert into a beautiful and developed one among the national enrollment lists.

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the governments could offer encouraging plans ,the

responsibility

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entirely lies with the

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individuals

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individuals

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individuals

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individuals

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their interest

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the governments' policies.It is their body and it’s

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best interest

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them to improve

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health

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.Individual’s

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and

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are best known to them and cannot be categorized as a standard plan by any organization.

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, people’s

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and

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vary, some would need

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strict diet control, whereas others might need

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activity or a nice place to walk.Since individual requirement and preferences

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it should be their

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to develop a healthy lifestyle. To conclude,in my opinion, the government can offer incentives, but cannot strictly enforce plans to improve everyone’s

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.It should completely be the individual’s

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to improve their

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.

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,

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need and

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are best known only to them.