You have seen an advertisement in an Australia magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter -explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Mom and Dad I hope you are well and I would like to inform you all about a weekly magazine that I read

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week in Australia. It was an advertisement for a vacancy to look after a six-year-old child and I am interested to apply for

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job. To be more precise, there are many reasons why I would like to choose

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job.

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, I don’t need to worry about my accommodation fees as I am allowed to stay with them for six months.

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, I have a passion for caring for children and even I could look after my younger sisters when I was in child. Taking care of children is not difficult for me because I was used to being babysat since I was in childhood and I know how to treat a child and be patient.

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, as above mentioned, I am of the view that

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role suits me to live and work in Australia.

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, I can get two days off every weekend and learn both sewings which is one of my passion and French on my holidays to increase my skills while I am here. Warm Regards Sandar Myint

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

198 words

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