Housing shortages in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the increasing population has caused trouble in purchasing

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society argues the fact that authorities should

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take

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remedy actions to fix

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of inadequate residences.

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, on

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hand,

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themselves should solve

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argument in upcoming paragraphs. To commence, the

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should restrict the allocation of land. To put it another way,

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should apply more taxes to real estate so that they limit the making of houses.

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, a focus on vertical housing would help to resolve the

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of even distribution of homes. As an illustration, the apartments, and townhouses in developed cities like Singapore, are made in a vertical manner in limited areas.

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, authorities should apply more taxes to bungalows and large houses.

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,

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would purchase less of them. As an example, the Canadian

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the purchase of houses for two years to resolve the

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housing shortage. On

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contrary,

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could

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solve

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by themselves. To simplify, they should prefer living in

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and outskirts of towns

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of living in bigger cities.

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can find more job opportunities like farming in

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to earn a livelihood.

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would help in bringing more employment

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the country and in

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manner, society could

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develop the

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. The fresh air of

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would

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make

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more healthy and less stressed.

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, it would reduce crimes in society.

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,

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people

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move to metropolitan cities in search of better opportunities, they still face residential issues.

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, it is the responsibility of both

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people

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to resolve the

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by encouraging

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to live in vertical housing and

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