Housing shortages in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the increasing population has caused trouble in purchasing

lands

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. On the one hand,

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society argues the fact that authorities should

make

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remedy actions to fix

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issue

of inadequate residences.

However

, on

other

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hand,

people

themselves should solve

this

issue

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argument in upcoming paragraphs. To commence, the

government

should restrict the allocation of land. To put it another way,

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government

should apply more taxes to real estate so that they limit the making of houses.

Moreover

, a focus on vertical housing would help to resolve the

issue

of even distribution of homes. As an illustration, the apartments, and townhouses in developed cities like Singapore, are made in a vertical manner in limited areas.

Furthermore

, authorities should apply more taxes to bungalows and large houses.

Therefore

,

people

would purchase less of them. As an example, the Canadian

government

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the purchase of houses for two years to resolve the

issue

of

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housing shortage. On

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contrary,

people

could

also

solve

this

issue

by themselves. To simplify, they should prefer living in

villages

and outskirts of towns

instead

of living in bigger cities.

People

can find more job opportunities like farming in

villages

to earn a livelihood.

This

would help in bringing more employment

in

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the country and in

this

manner, society could

also

develop the

villages

. The fresh air of

villages

would

also

make

people

more healthy and less stressed.

Therefore

, it would reduce crimes in society.

To conclude

,

although

people

move to metropolitan cities in search of better opportunities, they still face residential issues.

Therefore

, it is the responsibility of both

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and

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people

to resolve the

issue

by encouraging

people

to live in vertical housing and

villages

.