Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Dear Airline customer service Manager, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my cabin
bag
missing which I forgot on the A2233 plane at Vancouver airport on 23rd of July at 9:30am.The plane was quite busy
hence
, I could not collect my
bag
. As you heard, the
bag
is a brand new one and it is in red colour.
In addition
, there is a name tag which is
also
having my name and address too.
This
is
also
having two support handles which would allow you to pull the
bag
during the rush place.
Furthermore
, I
also
wrote my ticket number on the
bag
just for identification and I am sure that,
this
would help us to catch the
bag
despite multiple bags in one place. I am more worried as there are some gifts which are mesmerized and expensive as well.
Furthermore
, it
also
has my phenomenal academic certificates along with employer reference letters from reputed organisations.
Last
but not the least, I
also
kept my home keys inside the
bag
which is more terrifying. I look forward to hearing a quick update with good news regarding my cabin
bag
. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.
Submitted by lakshma999 on

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