Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Dear Airline customer service Manager, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my cabin

bag

missing which I forgot on the A2233 plane at Vancouver airport on 23rd of July at 9:30am.The plane was quite busy

hence

, I could not collect my

bag

. As you heard, the

bag

is a brand new one and it is in red colour.

In addition

, there is a name tag which is

also

having my name and address too.

This

also

having two support handles which would allow you to pull the

bag

during the rush place.

Furthermore

, I

also

wrote my ticket number on the

bag

just for identification and I am sure that,

this

would help us to catch the

bag

despite multiple bags in one place. I am more worried as there are some gifts which are mesmerized and expensive as well.

Furthermore

, it

also

has my phenomenal academic certificates along with employer reference letters from reputed organisations.

Last

but not the least, I

also

kept my home keys inside the

bag

which is more terrifying. I look forward to hearing a quick update with good news regarding my cabin

bag

. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Sat Aug 06 2022

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

196 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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