Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Dear Airline customer service Manager, I am writing

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letter to inform you about my cabin

bag

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missing which I forgot on the A2233 plane at Vancouver airport on 23rd of July at 9:30am.The plane was quite busy

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, I could not collect my

bag

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. As you heard, the

bag

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is a brand new one and it is in red colour.

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, there is a name tag which is

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having my name and address too.

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having two support handles which would allow you to pull the

bag

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during the rush place.

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, I

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wrote my ticket number on the

bag

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just for identification and I am sure that,

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would help us to catch the

bag

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despite multiple bags in one place. I am more worried as there are some gifts which are mesmerized and expensive as well.

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, it

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has my phenomenal academic certificates along with employer reference letters from reputed organisations.

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but not the least, I

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kept my home keys inside the

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which is more terrifying. I look forward to hearing a quick update with good news regarding my cabin

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. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Sat Aug 06 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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secondly
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in additional
moreover
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for example
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therefore
however
although
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Space travel has been possibile for some time, and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Some people believe that a person’s criminal record should be removed when they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?