You are going to work in another city for a year. A friend who lives there offered to help you find a place to live. Write a letter to your friend: • Express your gratitude to him/her • Describe the area that you want to live in • Explain what type of accommodation you are looking for

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Hi Jack, Hope you and your family are in good spirits! I am writing

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letter to let you that I have been offered a job at Paper boats as an Accountant. The job location is Pune city, and I will have to move within a week’s time to Pune. I would be grateful if you could help me in finding a decent place to live. To start with, my office is approximately 5KM from your place and

therefore

I thought that you would be the right person to ask. I am looking for a one-bedroom-kitchen apartment within the same radius. I prefer to live alone as my parents will keep visiting me once a month.

In addition

, I would be glad if the apartment is located in a well-constructed society and had its own gym and swimming pool. As you know, I have gained a lot of weight during the lockdown period and having these amenities can prove to be of immense benefit for me. Please let me know if you can help me with my request. Give my regards to your parents. Yours sincerely, Mia

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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187 words

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