Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Dear Customer service manager, I am writing

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letter to inform you about my missing cabin backpack which I forgot on the A887 plane at Vancouver airport on 27th July.

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, It was a quiet rush on the plane when we arrived at the airport and somehow I forgot while coming out of the plane. As you heard, my

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is a VIP brand new one which I bought a few days ago during the holiday season at our place. It

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has a name tag along with additional two handles which would help to pull the

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despite the rush at any place.

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, you can see my name on the

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which I wrote with a pen to identify the

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in rush place too. I was more worried about inside items. I kept them in two different folders. In the right side folder, we have mesmerized and breathtaking sceneries which I decided to present as a gift to my friend. Whereas, in the left side folder, I kept my career certificates which I obtain from a reputed institution.

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but not least, I

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kept my home keys and now I am thinking about how to go a home with empty hands. I look forward to hearing a quick update on

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letter and I hope it will come soon. Yours Faithfully, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Sat Aug 06 2022

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

227 words

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Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their m ain subjects. Others believe that it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays people are moving to other countries for seeking job.some people think it affects the childrens of such home negatively While someothers rhink it is beneficial to them. Discuss both sides and state your opinion.