Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on it? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Explain your choice by using specific reasons and details.

Some believe children must more hours in interact with new tech devices, because it will cause

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better thought skills and build more profession on the movement controls

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games and applications,while ,others argue and allege that

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early

ages

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must limited

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to spend in front of platforms ,because it cause of disorders and lack of social

commiunications

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communication

communications

among kids ,

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, in my opinion, parents and teachers must

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to balance their plans to use of tech-devices,so ,I am going to discuss both of view to clarify

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of all, many research scientific studies have

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demonstrated that spending too

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hours in front of platforms might cause

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health problems in related to

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brain performance and the eyes in primary school students ,alongside , it has been seen

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lack of poor social communication among them ,because , they have

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the majority of their

time

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solidarity

and have not

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time

to deal with their friends and classmates .

However

, it has been designed many different games and

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gadgets

for youth people that can organize

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way of thinking and build

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neuronal

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for

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possible problems ,

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game website has

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published the result of scores on

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thinking among their gamers and it has been compared with non-user students ,so , the earlier group have got better scores in schools too. In conclusion, unlimited

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in front of computers and laptops has

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caused

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visual problems and health issues among children ,but, the proper

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to teach children to use

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technology equipment will build better skills in particularly

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tough

thought

,so, I think

policy makers

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must control the

time

of youth people to use of technology ,