Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. Has the positive effects been more than negative ?

In today's
world
,
technology
plays a dramatic role as well as
it
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directly impacts
people
’s relationships with each other. In
this
essay, I will explore how
technology
involves
people
interaction,
pros
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the pros
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and cons of that.
Firstly
I will show how
technology
changes
this
and
secondly
demonstrate
pros
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the pros
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and cons of it. Before
world
war 2,
people
did not have
proper
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technologies to manage their connectivity with each other. Mostly they had to navigate to meet relevant
people
or they used different mediums like passing messages over other messengers,
sending
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and sending
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messages using animals like pigeons. But
this
was completely changed after the
world
war. They have invented the telephone, internet, mobile phones, social media etc.
Now
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this
has become a massive level.
People
use the internet to communicate with a person over the sea or
another
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in another
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country which is far away within a few seconds. They are using social media like
facebook
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Facebook
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,
twitter
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Twitter
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to pass their messages to a person or entire community. They use chat applications like
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
,
imo
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to chat with their loved ones. Not
technology
makes it easier to interact with
people
.
However
, there are pros and cons
of
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the
technology
. Most of the time it depends on the
people
's usage. Due to
this
technical impact, the
world
has become more digitized.
People
like to meet with each other virtually rather than meet physically.
This
will be a reason to separate the
people
from each other physically.
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, there are
lots
of frauds going on
with
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on
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the internet.
Lots
of
people
use fake details,
fake
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and fake
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profiles to be with each other.
Therefore
lots
of unwanted things happened.
Lots
of news cited international frauds like robbing,
hijacking
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and hijacking
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today.
In
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sum up, even though
technology
makes our life easier as well as it makes society more complicated. In my opinion,
technology
has become both a positive and negative development in modern society. Using
technology
in the right way will be easier for us to get the maximum benefit of it.
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