You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter 1. describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it. 2. say how the story personally relates to you. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mark,
It has been a long time since being out of touch with you. I hope you are well. I write
this
letter in regards to the story
that you asked me very before about a news item in my country. Luckily, I recently read an impressive article about an attractive place in our country where many legends originated.
The place is Tibet, and the adventure story
is about the exploration of Tibet. I am sure you must have heard of this
mysterious place many times. However
, I am also
certain that you don't know it very well. This
story
tells the experience of the first
man who climbs the Moutain Everest, the highest peak on the earth. Therefore
, I can confidently say you will enjoy the adventure experience very much.
Also
, do you know that I was born in Tibet? I think you must be surprised by this
fact. I choose this
story
because I want to introduce my hometown to you. I really hope you will enjoy it.
Best Regards,
DouglasSubmitted by d0u9.su on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite