You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Julia: I hope you are all well and I am sorry for my late reply.
Last
week, you asked me to tell you a big news item that recently happened in China. What a coincidence, I happen to want to share a piece of up-to-date news with you. These days, I noticed that a lot of tourists have been stuck in the tour resort Sanya in Haina Province because of Covid 19 Pandemic. The local government asked them to finish two Covid acid tests within 48 hours, before which visitors were not allowed to leave the city.
In addition
, visitors had to pay for the accommodation by themselves, and the price of aeroplane tickets has surged to a ridiculous price. I am taken aback by the news as I have always loved to travel. I can imagine how they would feel facing
such
an accident. Nowadays, I don't plan to go anywhere in case I will experience what the tourists have ever experienced in the
last
week. I hate the Covid pandemic, and I am so longing for a normal life before the pandemic broke out in which I could travel around the world. Please give my best regards to your family. Warm regards. Jane
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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