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Nowadays most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage them to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree?

#people #study #university #skills
Recently,there has been a heated debate
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 whether a
a
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new
language
 for international communication should be created.According to me,it is a good idea to create
an
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 universal
language
 for the whole
world
 to use. On one hand,having
an
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 universal
language
make
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 it more easy and
convenient
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 for
for
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each person to travel
foreign
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 countries without being held back by
language
 barriers,making their visit a lot more enjoyable and relaxing.Not only beneficial to entertainment purposes it is
also
help
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 out in the field of education as students having
an
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universal
laguages
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languages
language
 at their disposal can attain knowledge from every part of the
world
.
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Finally
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Finally
,
an
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 universal
language
 is a huge step for the economy of the
world
 because it
make
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 trading among countries more
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 as there
is
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 no
language
 barriers interrupting them;
therefore
,increasing the
economy
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 status of each
country
.
On the other hand
,many have argued that having
an
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 universal
language
 will destroy the identity of many
country
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 as
language
 is undeniably an important part of each culture,it is a thing that was built up over the course of a
country
;in short,it
represent
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 the history of a
country
.But having a universal
language
make
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 everyone
be
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eager to learn
a
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it to cope with the pace of life as
an
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 universal
language
 will definitely be
priopitied
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prioritised
 for better jobs.Not only that making a new
language
 for international communication is no easy task at all,you have to prove to the
world
 that
this
language
 is both easy and effective for the
world
 to use.And as for now,we already have a close
language
 for that spot which is English. In conclusion,
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 for me having a new universal
language
 do still have many
drawback
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drawbacks
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 but I think the advantage definitely
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outweigh
outweighs
outweight
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outweigh
 it.
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