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The table and the bar chart below illustrate frequent reasons of Britains for travelling abroad and three world parts, where they went, from 1994 to 1998. Overall, it is clear from the graph, that the journeys in Western
Europe
 were the most popular for UK residents.
Moreover
, the main purpose to visit abroad over the years was to spend holidays there.
Also
, as you can see from the table, the total number of travellers tendency increased from 1994 to 1998. The majority of Britain tourists spend especially their holidays abroad,
for example
, 15246 from 22072 travellers in 1994 chose
this
 reason for their trip. 3155 asked people had a business trip, 2689 wished to visit friends or relatives, and 982 said, that they go abroad because of other reasons.
This
 ratio for travelling purposes stays, in general, the same until the year 1998. In 1994 about 19000 from 22072 Britains prefered Western
Europe
 for their voyage, only about 1000 chosen North America and 2000 travelled in other areas. Until the year 1998 the numbers of travellers in all three directions grew up, but the main trend didn't change, because the amount of Britains in
Europe
 rose to 5000, in North America to 1500 and in other areas to1000.
As a result
, Western
Europe
 stayed the most liked travelling area for British people.
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