Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Professionals
especially doctors and engineers play a vital role in
country’s
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progress and they are a huge asset to a nation. There is a controversy going on regarding
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their working rights, where some people believe, they are bound to do
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job
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only in that
country
where they did their practice while some oppose
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that and say that they can work anywhere as they desire. I will shed light on both views and
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the
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will give my take on
this
issue.
To begin
with, I will discuss the notion of those who argues that
professionals
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of their state.
By restricting
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their workplace can bring many advantages with to not only
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local population but
also
to
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government sector. It will bring
the
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innovation and modern techniques to a particular
country
and will help the government to maintain
economy
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the economy
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. The local natives will
also
be able to access their services.
For instance
, if a highly qualified person moves
to
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abroad to get a
job
there will
may
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leave a blank space in
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own
country
which cannot
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by anyone. In
this
case
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the
country
will have simply wasted its training on a particular person. Now, I believe those who oppose to conditions of doing
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a valid reason for that. Because
firstly
, under these terms they may not get
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international experience and working environment.
Secondly
, If there are not simply enough opportunities to get
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desired
job
how will they be able to flourish and survive under that
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By discussing both
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views in detail, I personally believe,
professionals
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that professionals
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must have the right to do their
job
anywhere in
world
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they wish to. As it has more benefits in long term for both the
professionals
and
nation
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growth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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