Most artist earn lower salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree ?

There has been a controversy about whether

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should receive funding from the

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to continue their work. I don't agree with

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standpoint, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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, we need to learn to take the consequence of the decision. It's expected that except for the top-notch

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, normal

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earn a quite low salary.

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, there are still hundreds and thousands of men who set their dream job as an

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because it's their dream, even though their career prospects will be less rosy. Take art schools as an example. There are hundreds and thousands of Chinese students vie with one another to get a place at a top art college. At

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point, we all know that it's arduous to earn money as an

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;

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, students' dreams of becoming an

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have not been discouraged.

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, we have to be responsible for our own decisions, and the

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shouldn't interfere.

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, the

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's funding can be detrimental to

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job. It's commonplace that there are always

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who want to gain without doing any work.

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, if the

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decides to aid the

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across the country; it's bound to happen that countless

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pretend to be

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and take the supply. As a consequence, the reputation of the

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is dampened;

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start to think

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are just a group of lazy

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who rely on the

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's aid to survive.

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, the

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's funding is advantageous at some point. Take Van Gogh as an example. He is only famous after he died when he was alive no one cherished and loved his artworks. In

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case, had he received some help from others, he could have made more contributions to our art world. In conclusion, I believe it's better not to aid the

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.