19 .As the world has become technological advance, computer are replacing more and more jobs that maybe lose because of computer. Discuss at lear one problem that may result.

With

this

, advancement in the

use

of technology,

lots

of work has been made easier and more satisfying in the past few years. While technology is becoming more advanced, the

use

of computers is replacing more jobs, and

lots

of work will be lost . In

this

,

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essay I will illustrate on benefits and as well

one

problem it may result in.

Initially

, back in the days of the 1980s,

people

carry out their job manually under hard labour which could affect their physical and mental health example , a farmer who had

a big hectares

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of land for cultivation employed large numbers of

people

who are to be paid after rendering their services. But, now technology has made it easier with the manufacturing of different machines

one

can carry out

job

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with less stress and as well save more funds . Again,

people

handled most official emails through typewriting where

lots

of strength and

efforts

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is been input and

also

much time consumed.

Hence

, the modern device has made it

more

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cheaper and less stressful thereby

one

can send an email in their comfort zones and it's less time-consuming.

Furthermore

,

lots

of businesses are advertised online with

people

's contact addresses, they no longer spend funds renting shops or offices and as well employing sales representatives to oversight their business.

This

, in

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increase

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unemployment within the community.

People

no longer carry money around because online banking has been installed and the

use

of

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automatic machines (ATMs) for easy banking around the world.

On the other hand

, regardless of the merits , we have to look at the demerits which have resulted in a high rate of unemployment , thereby creating more nuisance in the community. And

one

has to be aware of the basic knowledge of computers before working in an organization or company. In conclusion, the merits in the

use

of computer

is

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quite interesting and convenient

hence

making workload less and easily accessible. But with demerits,

this

could lead to more crimes and corruption in

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society.