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19 .As the world has become technological advance, computer are replacing more and more jobs that maybe lose because of computer. Discuss at lear one problem that may result.

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With
this
, advancement in the
use
 of technology,
lots
 of work has been made easier and more satisfying in the past few years. While technology is becoming more advanced, the
use
 of computers is replacing more jobs, and
lots
 of work will be lost . In
this
,
the
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essay I will illustrate on benefits and as well
one
 problem it may result in.
Initially
, back in the days of the 1980s,
people
 carry out their job manually under hard labour which could affect their physical and mental health example , a farmer who had
a big hectares
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 of land for cultivation employed large numbers of
people
 who are to be paid after rendering their services. But, now technology has made it easier with the manufacturing of different machines
one
 can carry out
job
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 with less stress and as well save more funds . Again,
people
 handled most official emails through typewriting where
lots
 of strength and
efforts
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 is been input and
also
 much time consumed.
Hence
, the modern device has made it
more
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cheaper and less stressful thereby
one
 can send an email in their comfort zones and it's less time-consuming.
Furthermore
,
lots
 of businesses are advertised online with
people
's contact addresses, they no longer spend funds renting shops or offices and as well employing sales representatives to oversight their business.
This
 , in
turn
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increase
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 unemployment within the community.
People
 no longer carry money around because online banking has been installed and the
use
 of
the
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automatic machines (ATMs) for easy banking around the world.
On the other hand
, regardless of the merits , we have to look at the demerits which have resulted in a high rate of unemployment , thereby creating more nuisance in the community. And
one
 has to be aware of the basic knowledge of computers before working in an organization or company. In conclusion, the merits in the
use
 of computer
is
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 quite interesting and convenient
hence
 making workload less and easily accessible. But with demerits,
this
 could lead to more crimes and corruption in
the
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society.
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