Some people think that hosting an international sporting events is beneficial for a country while others disagree. Do the advantages of hosting a major sporting events outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a certain school of thought who have the notion that

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holding a nationwide

tournament

is of more benefit to the country while others do not agree.

This

essay shall argue that, despite not supporting the idea of having a

tournament

, the benefits far exceed the drawbacks. Afterwards, a suitable conclusion shall be drawn.

Firstly

, employment is one of the many reasons individuals agree to

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a

tournament

.

This

is because, during

this

period

people

from all over the world come into the host nation and as

such

, more hands would be needed to provide various services to make them comfortable.

As a

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more

people

are engaged decreasing the unemployment rate. More so, it would serve as a means of generating income for the country. As

people

go to the

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centers

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for any game, monies are collected. Others

also

use the opportunity to visit various tourist

centers

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and

ones

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they go they pay a token increasing

the nations revenue

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.

For example

, it was announced by the sports minister that, about 60% of the youth between the ages of 20 to 30 were engaged during the 2015 World Cup held in Ghana.

Thus

, holding the

tournament

will help more

people

to get jobs and provide money for the country. Despite employment and income, having a nationwide

tournament

can not go without a challenge and one of them

is increase

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crime

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rate. A key factor to

this

is that, with the influx of

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group

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of

people

from various

background

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, vices like stealing,

abuse

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from arguments can arise.

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lose

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of lives and items like watches, monies and gold necklaces.

For instance

, it has been reported that since the beginning of the AFCON games presently going on in Nigeria, about 5000 dollars worth of items have been stolen and 50

people

hospitalized.

Thus

, a

tournament

can cause lives and properties to be lost. In conclusion, after examining the merits and demerits, it is seen that

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the ups far outweigh the downs. I will

therefore

recommend that government should lobby for

such

events.