In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The application of Artificial Intelligence (AI) has been thriving in different sectors like education and business. It is
also
predicted that it will be used in
vehicles
in the future. So, we may witness
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vehicles
without drivers after two or three decades. They may be several benefits and drawbacks of implementing
vehicles
that run without drivers;
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essay will present them and reach a conclusive opinion. On the one hand, if every vehicle on the
road
operates without a driver, it benefits everyone as there is
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low or even zero possibility of
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. All the programmed cars will maintain traffic discipline, resulting in
road
safety.
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cars shows that none of these cars run away
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, minimizing the chances of head-on collisions at
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intersections. Another advantage of these
vehicles
is that they are time-efficient, meaning that everyone can reach their destinations well on time. With no problems on the
road
, it is likely that the public and private
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artificial intelligence will not be delayed
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reasons other than waiting at the
road
intersections.
On the other hand
, driverless
vehicles
have a downside that they are expensive and not affordable
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the majority of people. They are already 250% more expensive than the most expensive electrical car at the moment.
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transportation system will be challenging owing to its costs. To sum up, despite having the disadvantage of being outrageously expensive, I think the advantage of automatic
vehicles
being safer and more reliable than manually operated ones, cannot be overlooked.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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