Smoking not only harms the smokers, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

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is not only harmful to the

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who consume them, but

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to those around the consumers who smoke should be banned in public facilities. I totally agree with

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statement because of some aspects.

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with, smoking has many worse effects ,especially on

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's bodies. A cigarette is able to cause many diseases

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as respiratory

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and throat

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. These diseases are really detrimental and can cause decreasing productivity of

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when they affect

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because

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. To take an example, there are a lot of

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who suffered from consuming

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, and all of them regret why they consumed

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in the past.

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, their productivity decrease to

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trend and they feel hopeless because of the

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.

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the healthy aspects, smoking can

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cause economic problems for

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. Some

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who consume

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are coming from mid-low societies, and because of that smoking

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should be limited by the authority so that

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only have several places for consuming

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. Making a strict rule can make them realize that smoking is a bad thing that can be done in a public facility. To take an example, the government can strict several public facilities for the

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as bus stations, airports, and schools.

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,

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can decrease the number of

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who get negative impacts from smoking. To sum up, we know that smoking is not only dangerous for

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, but

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for their surroundings. Suffering because of

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is one example of smoking, and

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are supposed to be banned from public facilities

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as schools, bus stations, and airports by making strict rules for the smoker in order that the number of

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who suffer from

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trend can be decreased slightly. I believe that when

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solution is made, it will make the number of consumers of

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decrease.