Topic: Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

Meat
is a commodity that has been eaten for ages. It was eaten by our ancestors, who were hunter-gathers on a daily basis along with fruits and berries. At that time
meat
was an essential commodity, without which one couldn't survive because agriculture hadn't been discovered at that time. I strongly disagree with
this
statement. In modern times, as our disposable income is increasing the tendency to eat
meat
is
also
increasing. The animal industry supports millions of workers who would go jobless if the entire world becomes vegetarian all of a sudden. It is
also
important to respect cultures, that have traditions related to eating
meat
and sacrificing animals. It is
also
possible to survive without eating
meat
, but studies have shown a lack of
protein
in vegetarian humans. A vegetarian diet has little to no sources of
protein
that can be synthesized by the human body. It supports the body as an excellent source of
protein
and vitamins not found in vegetables. A healthy diet in my opinion cannot be fulfilled without
meat
.
Meat
is a healthier option than grains
such
as rice and wheat too as these grains have little to no nutritional value while having a high amount of starch, carbohydrates and calories.
Meat
, on the other ,hand consists of mostly
protein
, and some fats depending on the part of the animal. In the end, I would like to conclude by saying that vegetarianism shouldn't be imposed, as
meat
is healthy, tasty and more nutritious than vegetables.
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