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Environmental problem such as pollution and climate variation are increasing nowadays. The government have taken some measures at a global level. But they got only few solutions. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved.

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Pollution
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, climate change and
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other
the
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ther
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other
 environmental issues are growing rapidly all over the world.
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 bureaucracy has taken some steps to solve it at
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 international level, they are getting some
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in return. Because
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 the measures are completely negligible with its problems. It can be solved by increasing
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awareness
awarness
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awareness
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strick
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 regulations.
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 with, the measures against
pollution
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 and climate differences are not working because authorities are failing to become effective it on
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 due to
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interest
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. Only taking probable steps can’t solve any problems, it has to be maintained
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workforce
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. Ministry are creating
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 continuously, but the human beings specially
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industrious
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 are not sustaining it
peoperly
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properly
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 those steps become negligible than polluting power which can not make any progress to reduce environmental facts.
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, every industrious group of the world
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 a huge amount of
pollution
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 and administration
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 gets lota of VAT from their businesses. Because of
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 government
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 push them to maintain regulations
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pollution
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.
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, the measure which
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 to reduce
pollution
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 and
environment
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 variation
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 diminished due to lack of maintenance.
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,
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 problem can be solved, if
group
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 of
individual
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individuals
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 become aware of its deleterious effect and follow roles and regulations strictly.
Awaring
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Awarding
 people about
pollutions
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pollution's
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 deleterious impact on nature and habituate can force people to pollute less and maintain systems of
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 which may lead to
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 all types of environmental issues resulting in our world will again
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 its purity. In
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Bhutan
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, they produce less
pollution
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 than other nations because their population are too
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concern
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 about their nature and their bureaucracy
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 too
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 to maintain roles either they will be punished.
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. The more aware a nation’s people
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about
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 their environment, the higher possibility
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 will be to escape less
pollution
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 and follow roles.  In conclusion, the issue of environmental impact is increasing day by day. Authority has created some way of
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,
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 but failed due to less
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 by human beings. That’s why those
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 can not
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solutions
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