Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education
is becoming nowadays essential day by day and more people are
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attending
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attending
colleges in order to get
better
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education
.
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believed that institutions should take exact numbers of male and female students in each and every subject. In
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I will discuss
both
ideas and give my appropriate idea. Compared to
past
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, today more and more females are outgrowing men in terms of
education
,
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development
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development
,
economic
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and
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technology
techonology
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technology
.
However
, in the
past
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many people used
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think that there should be more
number of
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males than females in every matter because the society is male dominating society and men should be more educated compared to
women
. Ancestors
also
used to believe that
women
are only for the
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household
houseold
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household
puposes
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purposes
and they should not be educated. Discussing
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the opposite side the time has completely changed compared to
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women
are now getting attention in terms of
education
.
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generations
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people
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are giving focus to
both
ladies and gents. Universities should start accepting
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equal number of
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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but the time is yet to come. By observing
both
scenarios I can strongly say that
the
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education
institutions should accept
equal
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number of
both
boys and girls during each and every class .In the
future
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we can
forsee
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foresee
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that
women
will dominate males in each and every
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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