Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantage and disadvantage of such a choice?

There's a saying healthy
food
promotes healthy living. In
this
, modern century quite a number of
people
decide to deal with ready-made
food
than homemade meals.
This
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the reasons behind
such
an ideology and
hence
, highlight the pros and cons that may result from
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such
choice of living. Due to the nature of some
people
's jobs, less
time
is been mapped out for cooking at
home
.
For example
, in the city of Lagos most individuals leave early in the morning and come back late at night
in other words
they find it highly difficult to eat
homemade
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meal
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because of the limited
time
schedule resulting due to overpopulation ,
thus
much traffic is on the high side,
people
try to be punctual to avoid unnecessary queries
this
could lead to loss of
one
's job. Again a few numbers of person could have the attributes of laziness and lack of
home
training. Regardless , there are some advantages to eating ready-made
food
. It is easily accessible,
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affordable , and lots of varieties are displayed for
one
to make choices ,especially at
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such
as Kilimanjaro and others , some
people
feel it's economical, and it saves
time
. Again, going out with friends to catch fun and interact with
one
another.
On the other hand
, the demerits seem quite outrageous and require more caution and discipline , consuming many cuisines made outside the comfort zone can be disastrous to health,
such
as obesity.
This
is a result of too much ingestion of junk,
also
poor hygiene could lead to stomach upset , and poor brain development and growth for kids due to less balanced nutrients. Lots of
people
could be at risk of heart diseases due to poor use of vegetable oils. Again, not having a proper manner on how to prepare
home
cuisine can lead to the loss of friendships and marriages. In summary, healthy
food
such
as
home
food
is pivotal to every individual regardless of the
time
consumption, age and status. notwithstanding,
one
can enjoy eating out with friends once in a while but not always.
This
helps to promote the lives and health of the individual in
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society.
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