Should the government fund the education and healthcare system? What is your opinion?

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Public
services
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which include
education
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and
health
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care
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are
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determinant
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of
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of living in any society. It is agreed that
government
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should
fund
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education
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and the
health
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sector.
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essay will analyse how
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will give equal access
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citizens to good
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and
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care
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, as well as serve as an avenue for revenue generation.
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development
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of
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and
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by the authorities
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access to equal and quality
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education
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and
health
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sectors.
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, it is widely known that most poor
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cannot afford good
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care
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in private
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facilities and quality
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government
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institutions. Funding of
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this sectors
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by
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government
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will reduce the social gap in accessing
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care
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and
education
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between the economic classes in the society and
also
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improve the standard of living of the people.
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, it is clear the
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should
fund
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public
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, funding
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and
health
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care
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has
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a good economic impact. Because people will pay for accessing
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this
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services
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in
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this
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facilities, revenue
are being generate
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are being generated
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and
thus
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improving the economic status of the community.
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pounds was generated by oxford university in 2021.
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money generated can be used
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further
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development
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of both
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education
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the education
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and
health
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sector to the world standard and
also
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fund
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other public
services
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.
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it becomes apparent the authorities should
fund
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education
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and
health
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care
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. In summary, funding of public
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by
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government
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the government
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gives equal access to quality
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and
help
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to generate income. It is
therefore
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agreed that authorities should
fund
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education
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and
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health
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the health
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care
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system.
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