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To solve the problem of traffic congestion govt should provide free public transport 24*7. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In today's modern era, most of us live a fast-paced life
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 a tight working or studying schedule. On weekdays, especially during rush hours, the traffic jam on the road is very bad. Some
people
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 believe that if the government
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 free
transport
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 could solve
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 problem in a significant way. As far as I'm concerned, I agree with the statement because there are plenty of advantages to the availability of free
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 around the clock,
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 it might still have a few drawbacks.
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 with, it will reduce private vehicles on the street, and
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 decrease greenhouse gas emissions and air pollution as well. By using public
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, not only can we slow down global warming to an extent, but
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 we can have a better quality of life and health with less pollution.
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, free
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 can help
people
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 to save costs. From my own experience, commuting expenses a month account for 15% of my salary.
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, it is much more efficient compared to cars, because a higher number of
people
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 can be carried in a means of mass
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 than a private car.
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,
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 policy could have certain disadvantages. Simply speaking,
people
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 tend to take things for granted when they receive something for free.
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, passengers may end up using mass
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 with less care.
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, since public
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 is often crowded, the chance of infections with the disease will be generally higher.
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, during the Covid-19 pandemic,
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 who travelled by
planes
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 easily got infected and needed to be quarantined upon their arrival. In conclusion, I've summarized both
pros
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the pros
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 and cons of
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 free-of-charge mass
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 24*7. In my perception,
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 could bring out more benefits to the citizens and the country's environment, too. Yet, proper rules and plans should be considered seriously in order to make
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 project successful,
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,
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government officials need to conduct a thorough study and make a solid design before implementing
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 programme.
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