The death penalty is best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?

Every person is not a criminal by their birth, but situations make them do crimes. It is generally viewed that to control and alleviate the

crime

rate, death punishment the most preferable by individuals. I,

however

, firmly differ with

this

statement and the reasons for my inclination are elucidated in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, the

first

and foremost reason to support my ideology is that, giving education to prisoners is the better way to control

crime

. To elaborate on

this

, sometimes people do crimes to fulfil their family's basic requirements.

Moreover

, unemployment is

also

a way to attract individuals to

crime

.

For instance

, if the government provide education to offenders, the rate of

crime

may reduce. Considering another fact is that giving capital punishment for every

crime

is not beneficial for society. Because of

this

; people who want to change their mentality, it is not good for them.

Furthermore

, the administrators create laws to give punishment according to the

crime

. As an illustration, the government

also

give a chance to the criminals for changing themselves, owing to

this

crime

rate might be reduced eventually. To conclude, to overcome the

crime

ratio, the death penalty is not

only

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gives a chance and providing education to them is a good option for the community.