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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talk to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. write a letter to this businessman. in your letter -remind him when and where you met -tell him what kind of job you are interested in -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

#plane #journey #businessman #chain #restaurants #contact #job #-remind #-tell #-say
Dear Mr Hemat I am writing to draw your attention to my demand. We sat
next
 together on the flight Emirate airline on the 22nd of September from Shiraz to Tehran in the morning and we had a warm conversation , particularly about our work during we had been on the air.
To begin
 with, since I have been working as a quality control expert for roughly ten years in various famous food factories I have a valuable experience in
this
 field which can be beneficial to you.
Moreover
, seeing that I am able to get some international recognized certificates in food quality and hygiene which would be necessary for marketing and making your business more prestigious in the public view I would imagine I can become a helpful member of your firm and ask to call me for an interview to discuss more in detail. I look forward to hearing you at the earliest convenient time. Best Regards, Seed Ezat.
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