The number of animals and plants is decreasing at a dangerous rate around the world. What are the causes of the problem? What can be done to improve this situation?

Many
animals
and plants are facing extinction and the number of these living things is dramatically decreasing all over the world. In my opinion,
this
phenomenon is a result of global warming and illegal human activities. I believe some effective remedies are to enhance our awareness
for
Change preposition
of
show examples
environment
Add an article
the environment
show examples
and to set some regulations or laws as a deterrent for these activities. One major factor
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
some kind of specie's extinction is extreme weather and climate change which are caused by global warming. The annual average temperature has been rising all over the world. Some habitats of
animals
and plants have been decreasing or have already vanished because of sea level rise. Specifically, the arctic ice where polar bears live is melting and they can't sustain their life without ice blocks where they can rest and sleep.
Therefore
, polar bears are threatened with extinction. Another major reason is illegal hunting. Some individuals or criminal organizations killed numerous
animals
just for their commercial purpose.
In particular
, some kinds of elephants are critically endangered. Focusing on solutions, reviewing our daily lif,e and acting for the environment is effective.
For example
, people conserve resources,
such
as water, oil, and electricity for the
next
generations to revel in these natural gifts.
Similarly
, we shouldn't do illegal dumping of waste at sea.Another effective solution is to enact strict laws or
to
Fix the infinitive
apply
show examples
levy a heavy penalty on people who fail to abide by environmental laws. These policies act as an effective remedy for crime prevention. In conclusion, human activity, from illicit hunting to wasting resources is responsible for climate change and the dying out of some kinds of
animals
and plants.
Therefore
, not only the government but we have to take responsibility for
this
problem and act for the environment.
Submitted by banbenyizhen0 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: