Nowdays, workplaces tend to employ equal numbers of men and women works. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In the modern era, gender discrimination is decreasing than before. It is a breakthrough change in our society.
Although
some people think that companies
should hire more male workers than female, workplaces are prioritizing men and women
equality
. In my view, it is a positive step and can bring benefits to our society.
When males and females are working together in one association, they earn exorbitant profits. This
is simply because between them, good bonding grows up and they are discussing any issues with each other. They share effective ideas also
. For example
, in my office men and women
ratio is 50:50. Because of this
equality
, our company
get lots of profit than before. When male staff does not work properly and gets distraction, they help them in every situation. Our women
workers are co-operative. If the company
will not hire women
, they will not keep their position. That’s why every company
should maintain equality
.
On the other hand
, if companies
circulated equality
for men and women
, they will save more valuable time
. Man and women
are working together and they will finish a large project on time
. One kind of competition grows up between them and they successfully complete any complicated task by the deadline. In my country, for instance
, most of the time
we see, because of this
less staff company
will not finish their work in the time
. Overseas buyers are so punctual and strict about dates. Because of this
,lateness they cancel the deal and never bring any project to the same company
. When companies
hired equal males and females, they do not face this
type of problem.
In conclusion, every workplace should balance man and women
's equality
. While lots of companies
achieve their goal doing this
, why we will not follow this
term? I strongly feel that we need to give value to equality
, it will be worth full for every workplace.Submitted by amijoyee on
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