You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter, say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to explain that some information which was published in Life Newspaper about cities in

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guidance

about shops,

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restaurants

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restaurants

, cinemas etc was provided by your article that can help tourists in my country. I

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completely

completly

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agree with your point of view about the quality of

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industry in

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you

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recommend

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restaurants

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restaurants

in Esfahan that

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should go

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toward your professional article , I would like to say

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view that most of the old

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in my country are the same as each other, are not correct. In fact,

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of these

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from each other ,

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the age of Menarjonban in Esfahan

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unique

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. There is an expert tour guide in my town who has been working in

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field for about 10 years , she can help you

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more guidance about historical

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. Do not hesitate to contact me if you need to discuss any

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details. Yours faithfully, Neda Mohammadi

ranjbari4526

Aug 9, 2022

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