You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter, say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to explain that some information which was published in Life Newspaper about cities in

Iran

, on

second

of October is not correct.

First

of all, a lot of useful

guaidance

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guidance

about shops,

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restaurants

resturants

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restaurants

, cinemas etc was provided by your article that can help tourists in my country. I

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completely

completly

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completely

agree with your point of view about the quality of

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catering

catery

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industry in

Iran

.

For

instance

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you

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recommend

recommand

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recommend

some of

good

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restaurants

resturants

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restaurants

in Esfahan that

holiday makers

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should go

.

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all

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toward your professional article , I would like to say

this

view that most of the old

building

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in my country are the same as each other, are not correct. In fact,

history

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of these

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structures

in structures

differ

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from each other ,

for

example

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the age of Menarjonban in Esfahan

are

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uniqe

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unique

in

Iran

. There is an expert tour guide in my town who has been working in

this

field for about 10 years , she can help you

for

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with

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more guidance about historical

building

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buildings

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in

Iran

. Do not hesitate to contact me if you need to discuss any

further

details. Yours faithfully, Neda Mohammadi