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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #situation #job #shortage #money #situations
The problem-solving is a quality of
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human being, and he has benefited from it throughout
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history. whether to surrender to the unfavourable conditions
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 or to fight against them has been a matter of controversy. personally speaking, solving problems is a core value of mankind, which needs to be retained. on the one hand, accepting detrimental situations could be considered
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 to be a critical thinker. the reason is that people must try to make the most out of all the happenings, including disadvantageous events.
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 and our mistakes.
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 trying to mend it, should be considered as a lesson that shows us the wrong way, which we have to avoid the
next
 time. as the creator of the lamp said 'I have learned 999 ways that we can not construct a lamp', and at
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, the 1000th attempt was successful.
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, had humans not removed the obstacles impeding his progress toward satisfying his wishes, he could not facilitate his way of building the modern life he has today.
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, man failed many times before he managed to turn his dream of flying into the reality of today's life, or creatively secured the goal of treating uncurable illnesses. in fact, limitation brings innovation, and
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 why we should not get defeated by the problems that arose while trying to advance our capabilities. in conclusion, I wholeheartedly believe that the subject that we never give up on must be improvements in the situations which bother us.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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