More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Nowadays,
people
thought that life
in cities is easier to get a job
and get a better life
. Even though, living in an urban will be more challenging than living in a county. Citizens tend to have a lot of money for managing their life
and the job
competition
is very high.
First
of all, living in the city
is undeniably expensive. That means the necessity there is more expensive than in a district, starting from grocery, transportation, cost
of living, as well as tax. Thus
, people
need to work harder to have a decent life
in an urban area. Second
, the job
competition
in the city
is more challenging as people
are not only competing with the locals but also
some graduates from prestigious universities. For instance
, my sister needed to pass many processes of examinations and compete with hundreds of excellent graduate students before finally
getting accepted into a multinational company. That is
why job
competition
and the high cost
of living are the main challenges of living in urban areas.
However
, the government
can make citizens get a better life
. Government
can reduce the cost
for people
, such
as improving public transportation and giving subsidies to local entrepreneurs. Doing so, will not only improve the economy of the people
but also
upgrade their life
in the best way possible. At the same time, providing cost
-less free public transportation will be a win-win solution for the government
and its citizens. Since the more people
use public transport the healthier the environment and happier government
in managing their city
. Besides
, the funding for local entrepreneurs will help the city
to develop its economy and local products. Therefore
, I am convinced that these solutions are the best among all.
In conclusion, people
that live in a city
will be more challenging and have more difficulties than people
that live in a county considering the high living cost
and high job
competition
but the government
can help and reduce the difficulties to get urban life
better by providing some funding on transport and local businesses.Submitted by miarosmia8 on
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