These days is it much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the diadvantages ?

It’s more common nowadays to

travel

to different

countries

for tourism as in the past.

This

is due to our

well developed

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airplanes

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aeroplanes

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and fast

runnig

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running

high-tech trains.

This

Essay will examine if the advantages of

this

development outweigh the disadvantages. In my view, the positives outweigh the negatives and

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essay will support my opinion with examples.

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Firstly

First

Fristly

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Firstly

,

this

easy way to

travel

allows people from all walks of life to see more of the world and

therefore

, to get a better understanding of other

countries

and other cultures. While

this

was formerly only possible to a very small range of

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people

poeple

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people

, today almost everyone has the possibility to visit other

countries

and to get a

glimps

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glimpse

of what is life outside

ones

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own

areal

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feels like. Someone, who

for example

never had been into another country and

appreas

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appears

to be

therefore

very

narrowr

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narrow

narrower

minded might benefit from a trip into another country, as

this

will widen his horizon and open up his mind. Back in the past,

this

would’t

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wouldn't

would

be possible.

Secondly

, do I think that

this

development is positive as it creates a worldwide connection, which is very

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beneficial

benefical

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beneficial

for the

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relationship

realationship

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relationship

between different

countries

. While in the past, every country was more or less by

themself

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itself

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,

nowdays

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nowadays

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everything

is emerged

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. Thanks to

this

, people

for instance

make friends all over the world and these friendships are able to

sustain

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due to

fact

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that it is so easy to

travel

into

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other lands and visit each other. Looking back in the past,

this

would not have been possible.

On the other hand

, do some people argue that

this

situation has a negative impact on

the earths climate

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the earth's climate

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as these transportation methods, especially

airplanes

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aeroplanes

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, are releasing a huge amount of CO2

emissons

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emissions

emission

, which

consequentely

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consequently

contributes to the

worlds

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world

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rise in temperature. I am convinced,

however

, that a switch

into

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to

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green energy for

airplanes

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aeroplanes

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, trains and

busses

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buses

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will soon happen and am

therefore

not concerned about

this

. To conclude, the development of

the

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convenient

travel

methods for tourism

into

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different

countries

is in my view to be seen as something positive as it contributes to a better understanding of cultures and helps to create and maintain relationships between different

countries

.