Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Arash Shirmo and I am living

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Homewood street, right

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to your home. I have seen your advertisement for finding someone that can help you at home coming summer.

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of all, please let me introduce myself. I am 16 years old and

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active boy. My father has learned me how to deal with technical problems of home and can fix some of the existing technical issues in your house

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since our house has a big garden, I am very familiar with garden works and have knowledge of agriculture.

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you can rest your mind about outdoor tasks

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, I help my mother to do the household duty and I am well experienced in it. I have seen your proposed salary amount in your advertisement. If you accept me and I get

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job, not only I buy a new USB Flash for my mobile phone but

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I can improve my English speaking skill. In the summer, I have an English language learning class on Monday and Wednesday

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not possible for me to be there but for the rest of the week, I will be free to come. Hope to get

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job and hear from you soon. yours sincerely, Arash Shiro

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

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