Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Arash Shirmo and I am living
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Homewood street, right
next
to your home. I have seen your advertisement for finding someone that can help you at home coming summer.
First
of all, please let me introduce myself. I am 16 years old and
very
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active boy. My father has learned me how to deal with technical problems of home and can fix some of the existing technical issues in your house
moreover
since our house has a big garden, I am very familiar with garden works and have knowledge of agriculture.
Thus
you can rest your mind about outdoor tasks
besides
, I help my mother to do the household duty and I am well experienced in it. I have seen your proposed salary amount in your advertisement. If you accept me and I get
this
job, not only I buy a new USB Flash for my mobile phone but
also
I can improve my English speaking skill. In the summer, I have an English language learning class on Monday and Wednesday
therefore
not possible for me to be there but for the rest of the week, I will be free to come. Hope to get
this
job and hear from you soon. yours sincerely, Arash Shiro
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