Children should take part time jobs in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies. What are the advantages and disadvIantages to children of doing so?

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agree with the statement that

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children

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childrens

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should take

part

in

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part

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time

jobs

.

Studies

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not the only things which

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knowledge to us. If one wants to survive in

this

modern world

then

he needs strong

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communication

communitation

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communication

and

inter-personal

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skills. The

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part

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time

jobs

as well as other

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, as well as other voluntaring activities,

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voluntary

volunteering

activities

provides

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a

door-way

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to individuals so that they can enhance their soft skills and excel in their respective fields. The

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part

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time

jobs

helps

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the

students

to prepare

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for the outside world. They should not be stuck inside the walls of their schools and be cut off from

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society. By doing

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part

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they can manage their expenses and they can learn a lot about finances, how to manage their money and how the tax system works. If a

student

does

part

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time

job along with their

study

, they

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will

wil

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will

also

learn

time

management and the importance of getting things right on

time

. Later on, after their

study

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students

will now be polished and ready for

work

through the

part

times

jobs

that they have done. They can use those skills to

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excel

excell

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excel

in their fields

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such

experiences. On the other

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, there are certain drawbacks

in

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doing

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part

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time

work

during your

studies

.

firstly

, it can affect the

study

of

students

. If a

students

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is trying to manage

the

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work

life as well as

student

life, he may not be able to balance both of these. If they perform

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in one state

then

the other might be drastically affected.

This

can

result

in late assignment submission, short attendance and low academic performance.

Secondly

, it can disturb the sleep cycle of a

student

. If a

student

is working hard and could not manage the

work

life , it can

result

in low sleeping hours which affects productivity which can harm the

study

of an individual and

also

they can not perform well in their

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part

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time

job. By doing

the

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part

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work

, they are

also

not affecting their

study

but

also

their health.

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,

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doing constant

work

after

study

hours can

result

in physical as well as psychological stress in

students

. They constantly have to run from one place to another and it gets hard managing both

studies

and

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part

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time

work

.

Consequently

, the

student

gets burdened with psychological stress which can

result

in

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sever

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depression and loss of

apetite

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appetite

. In conclusion,

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would say

students

should do

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part-time

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part

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time

jobs

along with their

studies

,

however

, they should find a proper timetable which will not burden them with constant stress and it should be easily

managable

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manageable

.