Children should take part time jobs in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies. What are the advantages and disadvIantages to children of doing so?

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jobs

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not the only things which

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knowledge to us. If one wants to survive in

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modern world

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he needs strong

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communication

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communication

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skills. The

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voluntary

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to individuals so that they can enhance their soft skills and excel in their respective fields. The

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for the outside world. They should not be stuck inside the walls of their schools and be cut off from

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society. By doing

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they can manage their expenses and they can learn a lot about finances, how to manage their money and how the tax system works. If a

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does

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job along with their

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, they

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learn

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management and the importance of getting things right on

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. Later on, after their

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students

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will now be polished and ready for

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through the

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times

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that they have done. They can use those skills to

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excel

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excel

in their fields

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experiences. On the other

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, there are certain drawbacks

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during your

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, it can affect the

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of

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is trying to manage

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life as well as

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life, he may not be able to balance both of these. If they perform

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in one state

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the other might be drastically affected.

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in late assignment submission, short attendance and low academic performance.

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, it can disturb the sleep cycle of a

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. If a

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is working hard and could not manage the

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life , it can

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in low sleeping hours which affects productivity which can harm the

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of an individual and

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they can not perform well in their

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not affecting their

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their health.

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doing constant

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after

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hours can

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in physical as well as psychological stress in

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. They constantly have to run from one place to another and it gets hard managing both

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work

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, the

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gets burdened with psychological stress which can

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depression and loss of

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. In conclusion,

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would say

students

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should do

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jobs

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along with their

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, they should find a proper timetable which will not burden them with constant stress and it should be easily

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manageable

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