Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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or should not hosting an
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international
intenational
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international
sports
event
in a
country
. While some people reckon it is bad for some certain
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, I believe that they could take some benefits from it. On the one hand,
although
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chance for those countries to gain global exposure, there are still some drawbacks.
Firstly
, it will
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that
country
plenty of time and tons of money to prepare for it.
For example
, it took Brazil 5
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to upgrade the stadium and many other facilities. It
also
records that during the World Cup, the
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rate have
been increase
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significantly.
On the other hand
, hosting an international
sport
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event
might bring some
benefit
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to those countries. Countries
those host
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it might become
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popular destination to travel it both help local people and the financial of each
country
. It
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a chance to promote their own culture to foreign tourism. It would be great if your
country
become the place where everybody wanted to come to visit. In conclusion,
although
hosting
an
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sports
event
might bring some problems, the benefit of spreading and sharing our culture was greater. In my opinion, each
country
should
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at least some small
event
in the future.
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  • economic boost
  • infrastructure
  • national pride
  • cultural showcase
  • inspire a generation
  • temporary boost
  • environmental concerns
  • sustainable planning
  • public funds
  • divert resources
  • tourism influx
  • job opportunities
  • sports development
  • public health
  • construction
  • strategic investment
  • global audience
  • hospitality
  • public services
  • cost-benefit analysis
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