Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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of
people
believe that a foreign
language
is solely learnt with the purpose of visiting other countries or
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goals, while, there is an opposite opinion that the mentioned goals are not the absolute reason to learn another
language
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I am going to discuss both views and elaborate on my
reasons
to concur with the
second
opinion. A foreign
language
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acquisition
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acquisition
has been Stryotepicaly believed to be only for
people
who aim to spend their vacation abroad or their job requires international
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interactions
interaction
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interactions
, while these types of
reasons
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of mentioned motives are the most
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reasons
to learn a
foriegn
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foreign
language
, there are a great
number
of
people
who only learn foreign
languages
for enjoyment or there are scientific porpuses behind their decisions to do so.
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a great
number
of Korean
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learners in my country state that their goal is to learn
this
language
only for the pleasure of watching
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movies. It is worth mentioning that a significant
number
of
people
learn other
languages
to study other cultures and
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structure of other
languages
. In
this
regard, nowadays, a great proportion of
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different
diffrent
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different
foreign
languages
have been established in universities and
this
trend is developing among world universities day by day.
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instance
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the department of Japanese
language
and literature has
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recently commenced its activity in my university,
although
, the classes are small and facilities like books and Learning materials are not sufficient due to
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newly
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established
stablished
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established
,
but
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the
number
of applicants for
this
major is
incridibaly
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incredibly
higher than
expections
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expectations
and more than half of these
people
only intend to learn
this
language
because they love Japan and its culture. In drawing to a close, business and travel are not the only
reasons
to
aquire
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acquire
a foreign
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foreign languages
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languages
but
also
there are a great
number
of
people
who follow
this
path only for their love toward a culture And
language
of a nation,
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