It is important for children to learn the diffirence between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that maternity and paternity raising ways play a radical role in their

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stability and future. Some people argue that punishing kids have many benefits. Whilst others claim that negative consequences outweigh the positive ones. In

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am going to discuss both views and draw my own conclusion. On the one hand,

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children

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leads to plethora

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. They learn how to be

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and assist them to be successful persons in their future

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it guides them and help them to make their correct choices in life,

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strict families

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their offspring rules and values. As a shining example, a recent study

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published by king Saud University claims that most

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prominent

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individuals were raised in strict families with strict rules. On the other flip of the coin, strictness and hardness might leads to mental and social issues

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children

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like unstable personalities or lack of confidence.

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, numerous individuals who suffered from hitting and emotionless families have an

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personality

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with unstable

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emotions

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emotions

and weird

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.

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, my friend Sara has

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with nightmares

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she was a child due to the way that her mother used to treat her and now she is suffering from panic attacks and taking

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psychiatric

medications. In conclusion,

children

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navigating and punishing have many merits.

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, negative consequences have been shown

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decade on their

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.

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, I strongly believe parents should

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discipline

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their offspring and guide them without harsh punishments or abuse