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The news media have become too much influence in people lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#news #media #influence #people #lives #development
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Different sources of
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 have helped
people
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 in knowing what is happening around the world but according to some
people
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, knowing about everything could be disadvantageous and dangerous and can lead to some pitfalls. While others, including me, refute
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 claim. It is undeniable that mass
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 has brought enormous benefits to mankind. Starting with, it is through
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media
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 that
people
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 are being provided with an up to date information on different topics.
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, it is due to the daily weather forecast being projected by the
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 channels that
people
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 know if they are required to take umbrellas or not.
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,
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media
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 is the biggest source of communication which provides a platform for marketing companies to advertise their product and services to a wider audience, which in turn, helps in boosting their product sales, thereby, increasing the company’s revenue. According to a recent study, the businesses which use
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 as a source for promotion for their products have witnessed a boom in their sales by 10%.
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, mass
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 has likely been proven advantageous for businesses. On contrary, there are some negative influences brought by
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. Sometimes the type of
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 being communicated to the receiving audience is not appropriate for all audiences and might convey depraved or bad messages.
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, in India, the consequence of sharing the rape incidents happening around the country by the top
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 channels has resulted in an increase in the number of rape cases.
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, there are times when the
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 being communicated about some
people
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 is unrealistic or fake.
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 results in making them depressed or resulting in committing suicide. In conclusion,
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 there are some negative impacts of mass
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 on
people
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 with regards to the appropriateness of the audience to whom the
news
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 is being communicated, providing the latest information and being a source of the advertisement has made the
news
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media
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 cater toward more positive development in their field.
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